Hi Sarn, well done for working to improve your detail and direct speech. I do see a lot of errors that you had worked on to improve such as making sure it was in order of events and using correct tense for words such as teached - taught. I think you copied over an older version of your work
Hi Sarn, well done for working to improve your detail and direct speech. I do see a lot of errors that you had worked on to improve such as making sure it was in order of events and using correct tense for words such as teached - taught. I think you copied over an older version of your work
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